Portraits?

I think it sounds professional and relaxed, sounds great... another idea is throwing a little humor in there, I was thinking of the other guy's idea that wrote a comment, except his version sounds pessimistic.....you could try your above ad, then continuing say,"Nobody wants to be fat and ugly, so capture the magic withErik R. Soto so you won't look like it." Hahaha, I don't know, something like that.